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your email is good. but there is a mistake in the verb phrase. for example "would you mind to send us..." it should be "would you mind sending us..."
Your email is clear eva but the name of the send this message shouldn't Jan if I'am not wrong, Jan is the one who asked you to send this email :)
Ok, thank you Atmi. I will change it later.
Really? I am sorry, I think Jan is the name of "us". Oh My God
Your formal email is will be done! Good post, I agree with atmi and dewi too, so you can update your new email latter as soon as posible. Good job eva! :)
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BalasHapusyour email is good. but there is a mistake in the verb phrase. for example "would you mind to send us..." it should be "would you mind sending us..."
BalasHapusYour email is clear eva but the name of the send this message shouldn't Jan if I'am not wrong, Jan is the one who asked you to send this email :)
BalasHapusOk, thank you Atmi. I will change it later.
BalasHapusReally? I am sorry, I think Jan is the name of "us". Oh My God
BalasHapusYour formal email is will be done! Good post, I agree with atmi and dewi too, so you can update your new email latter as soon as posible. Good job eva! :)
BalasHapus