Eva, I found a number of grammatical mistakes. Say for example, "Door open at.." is supposed to be "Door opens...". Being grammatical define the accuracy of your writing; do better next time. Still way to go. Best luck!Best,Ms.Dep
Eva, I found a number of grammatical mistakes. Say for example, "Door open at.." is supposed to be "Door opens...". Being grammatical define the accuracy of your writing; do better next time. Still way to go. Best luck!
BalasHapusBest,
Ms.Dep